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So, like, whoa!...I wrote something. Meandering and pointless and taking liberties with the way things are, but what else is new?

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i love it :) it gave me chills and brought tears to my eyes...which is the way wonderful writing always affects me these days. i love your characterisations, and i always, always love the way you write JC. so, so pretty.

The sound of JC’s voice was syrup sliding over a cut. "He never could."

i love that line :)

love love love it :)

/incoherent feedback.

sorry.

*g* Seeing as I tend to give somewhat incoherent feedback m'self, I can hardly complain, now can I?

I'm so glad you like my JC, because I find him difficult to write. Chris and Justin, no problem. Joey and Lance come in, do their job, and leave. But JC's harder to get a grip on, so it's very welcome feedback indeed. ^_^

Thank you!

Once, when they’d been at a zoo in San Diego or something, a camel had spit on the kid who was standing next to Lance at the camel exhibit, and it had been yellow and thick and smelled of puke, not like spit at all. He had a vision of himself opening his mouth and spewing clumpy yellow split-pea soup at JC, and it almost made him laugh

That is wonderful. Really really awesome.

Good stuff! Thanks for that :)

*giggle* You liked the camel-spit. That's so awesome. ^_^

Thanks for the feedback, sweetie!

I wish I could give you high quality feedback and say something like, "That part where so-and-so says this - that was excellent," or "that part where this-dude did that, that sucked."

But I can't. It was so good and there were lines that stood out only now they're all cloudy. But characterization! So so good! And dialogue! So so good! And yes! So so good! I think I need a cigarette - and I don't even smoke!

How 'bout I smoke one for you? ^_~

And hey--feedback is of the good, no matter what it consists of. So thanks for taking the time to let me know you liked the fic!

*snug*

Wheeeeee!

So pretty! And Chris's strange words. What's up with that?

And “Why’s he so beautiful?” “He doesn’t know how to be anything else,”

oh yes.

And JC has the hots for Chris! whoop whoop!

And I'm drunk, if you couldn't tell, but I still liked the story.

Chris has strange words?...damn. I guess it must just be me, since I found everything he said to be eminently sensible. ^_~

thanks for the feedback, drunken or no! *giggle*

Okay, I just thought Chris used a great many fancy words, like 'agitated'. regardless of your unfair assessment, Joey, I remain agitated

And 'pertinent.' Just funny, I thought.

And 'spling' was a nice word! heh.

Um, and that's a really fucking nice icon, you hear me?

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