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[bossymarmalade]

Um, so...I've had quite a bit of tequila, and becky's Timbertrick was of the good, and I figured, hey, if she had the balls to post smut, what the hell's holding me back?

So against my better judgement, here's mine.

Turn It Off

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[beckynicky.livejournal.com]

No no...that was one of your best judgement moments.

Heehee...they were playing jeopardy during sex.

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

*giggle* They're losers. I love them. ^_^

Glad you liked! *snuggle*

[dine.livejournal.com]

"Guadala-fucking-jara," Chris hissed, biting cruelly at Justin's shoulder, then biting his hair, strands of it pulling painfully between his teeth.

"Dios, yes," Justin mumbled, not really thinking

This story was full of wonderful lines, but this made me laugh out loud. I loved the idea of Chris continuing to provide the right questions to Jeopardy while busy fucking Justin stupid. This was so great, and more would be nice.

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[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

while busy fucking Justin stupid....

*sigh* I love the sound of that. Mmmmmm.

Tee! I made you laugh! Thanks a ton. ^_^

*dies*

[pop-tarts.livejournal.com]

Okay.

Somehow, you've totally read my mind about smut. Like, not fair. ...okay, I have this thing, as you well might have guessed from any smut I posted, about people talking about the most innappropriate things. I have this story, all planned out, where Chris and Justin have a conversation -- Chris's idea -- while Justin blows him. But Justin, being the masterful cocksucker he is, ends up making Chris just go, "I like oranges" and "mangoes, yeah, they're-- what?" and such.

So.

Muh.

Jeopardy.

That was. that was. --I don't know if I can even say it, because it's getting into TMI. Hot, hot, hot.

But:

"Turn the tv off," Justin barked, his hips rising against Chris' hands.

Justin. Barking. It was. Mmmm. and, the whole "vikings" argument. Mmm. Mmmmmmmmmm, even. Just. It's.

and:

Justin opened and closed his mouth mindlessly, feeling like a rabbit in a snare,

So good. So good. Subtle. Good. So good.

But finally:

"What is too much is not enough," he murmured, feeling the words break and disfigure on the cloth.

"That's the wrong answer," Chris said distantly. "You're wrong."

*melts* Post-coital cozy Chris. And. Jeopardy. Um. Yeah. So. Talking = good. Talking = very good. Hit a kink. Muh.

Also. More smut from you, I think, would be a good thing. Or a Very Bad thing. But amazing, either way. ;)

"turn it off"? Turn me on.

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[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

But Justin, being the masterful cocksucker he is, ends up making Chris just go, "I like oranges" and "mangoes, yeah, they're-- what?" and such.

*snicker* I love you. Really, I do. And the fact that I was up half the night reading your fic while in the process of getting drunk and then ending up writing this fic is probably telling in some way that I haven't figured out yet. ^_~

Justin. Barking. It was. Mmmm. and, the whole "vikings" argument.

Yeah. Yeah, he should, shouldn't he? And the viking thing--I was talking puppies on the phone with my friend Margaret, and she mentioned that if the beard horns got any longer, Chris could braid them like a Viking. I just about died. Vikings are hot, man.

*melts* Post-coital cozy Chris. And. Jeopardy. Um. Yeah. So. Talking = good. Talking = very good. Hit a kink. Muh.

Talky sex is...yes. It's all in spaces between the sex, and over the sex, and sometimes underlying the sex, but it tends to be random and weird and very, very yum. I'd still like to see the blowjob-and-oranges story. ^_^

Yay yay yay! You're wonderful. Thanks so much! *snuggle*

[linbot.livejournal.com]

Wow. It's late here, and I'm probably overtired, so please forgive my lack of eloquence but, guh. 8)

Hot, snarky, conversational and easy. I love it.

Linda.

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

And I like your sum-up, because I don't think either of them would protest too much at being called "hot, snarky, conversational, and easy." At least, they shouldn't. ^_~

Thank you!!

[nothinggold.livejournal.com]

That was great! I'm incredibly glad you decided to share that with us.

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

Tee! I'm incredibly glad you guys liked it and are telling me so! Thank you. ^_^

[likeasunburn.livejournal.com]

If that's against your better judgement I don't know if I could handle what you post when using "good" judgement. ;)

It's funny and hot and clever, and yum with the talking while fucking.

Unfortunately I couldn't read Becky's timbertrick because it is a protected entry. Any chance it's on a website?

*sunnie

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked their talky sex. Thank you! ^_^

Um, as far as I know, Becky's fic isn't on a website since it's a birthday fic. She might let you read it if you ask her, though. ^_^

[beckynicky.livejournal.com]

Sorry, it is unlocked now so you can read it.

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[likeasunburn.livejournal.com]

Oh! Thank you, you rock! =)

*runs to read*

[rrrosa.livejournal.com]

Oh good *lord* I loved that. I think the best part was not knowing why the fuck they kept saying stuff, and sort of just plowing on regardless because, well, *smut* and then ahahahhaha. There it was. Great beginning, great ending, and full of goodness in between. Thanks so much!

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

*giggle* Whoo-hoo, I kept you reading despite wtf! And thanks a ton for the feedback, because I'm normally crap at writing smut, which is why I don't do it often, and I need the encouragement. ^_^

Tee!

Oh my.

[apetslife.livejournal.com]

Oh my wow.

Wow.

This is just perfect. So damn hot and good and funny, and I didn't get the Jeopardy thing (Guadalajara? WTF? *grin*) and then I did, and I was laughing like a loon. And then Justin did that thing, and Chris did that other thing, and I was more panting than laughing. Wow.

Thanks so much. SO good!

Re: Oh my.

[bossymarmalade.livejournal.com]

*giggle* I love feedback like this, all incoherent and filled with the love. Thank you thank you! *snuggle*