bossymarmalade: blue eye with lashes of red flower petals (jc)
miss maggie ([personal profile] bossymarmalade) wrote2002-06-06 06:29 am

i'm doing this tonight

Next one!



bye bye bye

That boy took my love away
Oh, he'll regret it some day
But this boy wants you back again


The idea of Justin just spitting out the words for this song and channelling all his anger through the performance? Very appealing, and frightening, and intense. And I was much fascinated by the scrutiny of the Justin/Britney breakup from JC's point of view.

That boy isn't good for you
Though he may want you too
This boy wants you back


And ugh, Wade! But I like the idea that Justin would be more broken-up over losing somebody he considered a friend than somebody he considered a girlfriend.

Oh, and this boy would be happy just to love you,
But oh, My I


Sadly, he's not very good in bed. What a painful thing for Brit to say--but of course, she has her reasons and all. Still. Poor Juju.

Oh, That boy won't be happy till he's seen you cry

And JC's protectiveness, his anger at Britney--all wonderfully done. It's nice to see JC up at arms for one of his boys.

This boy wouldn't mind the pain
Would always feel the same if this boy gets you back again




Best Line: It's almost Machiavellian. You never would have thought that Brit had it in her. You're nearly tempted to try and set her up with Lance.

Foodie: She orders some coffee concoction loaded with milk and sugar, and you resist the impulse to tell her that's not going to do her voice any good, and she can use all the help she can get.

[identity profile] liz-w.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 08:48 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks darlin'. I had fun writing it. Wasn't sure if the whole telling the story backward and forward was confusing, but it seemed to work out in the end.

Thanks for the comments!

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[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
The link is fixed now--thanks for letting me know. ^_^

And yes, the backwards-and-forwards thing worked just fine, because it fit in with the whole agitated feel and got me all worked up with righteous JC-like indignation of DOOM!

[identity profile] therisingmoon.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 09:27 am (UTC)(link)
It's almost Machiavellian. You never would have thought that Brit had it in her. You're nearly tempted to try and set her up with Lance.

I'm with you on that about best line.

But really, poor Justin! Not.

You seem easily amused, aren't you?

Me too.

My shiny icon amuses me.

Piffle and feh.

Oh, and by the way, that icon amuses me to no end.

And I have a JAAAAAYCEEEEEE IN SPACE! candy wrapper.
Actually, it's a HELLO KITTY IN SPACE! candy wrapper, but what's the difference? It's sparkly and pink and JC is Hello Kitty.

You want one?
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[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, Justin doesn't deserve to be cheated on. Especially not by Wade. Ick!

And, heh--I've outpaced Hello Kitty by now. It's Weiss Kreuz or nothing, baybee! ^_^

Also, Lance the magpie! He likes shiny things! Tee!

[identity profile] therisingmoon.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 10:46 am (UTC)(link)
I'm serious about the candy thing.

Do you want an actual individually wrapped peach or orange flavored candy with a sparkly wrapper and Hello Kitty in space on it?

I have a whole bag of Hello Kitty candy and I can't finish it off by myself so I decided to share with LJ friends!
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Re:

[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle* Well, since you put it that way...peach. ^_^

[identity profile] therisingmoon.livejournal.com 2002-06-06 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Then email your mailing information to jadestar16@yahoo.com and I'll send you a peach candy wrapped in a sparkly wrapper with Hello Kitty JC on it.